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Lena finished chewing the last bite of her sandwich, dragging the moment out like it mattered—like she wasn’t already half-swooning on the inside while doing everything in her power not to show it.
He was so lucky she was in love with him. She wiped the corner of her mouth with her thumb and shot him a smirk, eyes glittering like trouble just waiting to be uncorked. “Careful, Maren,” she said, rising from her chair with the kind of saunter that had no business in a cozy kitchen. “You start talkin’ like that, I’m gonna think you like it when I win.” Her plate clinked softly as she scooped it up, stacking his on top with the easy, practiced grace of a woman who made herself at home in more ways than one. She crossed to the sink, boots thudding lightly across the floor, his flannel swaying loose around her hips like it had never belonged anywhere else. Warm water hissed to life as she rolled up her sleeves, rinsing each plate like it was just another part of the rhythm they’d built together—coffee mugs and inside jokes, Sunday mornings and borrowed tools, quiet glances and loud hearts. The kind of rhythm that didn’t need explaining. Lena tilted her head just enough to glance back at him over her shoulder, the spray from the faucet catching in the light. “Let the whole damn town think what they want,” she said, voice sweet and sharp like wild honey. “Grumpy mountain man and the brat he never bothered to civilize. Let ’em think we bicker over breakfast and fight over thermostat settings.” Her smile softened, even if her tone didn’t. “We know better.” She turned back to the sink, the warm water running over her fingers like it could rinse away every rumor, every assumption, every small-town whisper about what love was supposed to look like. Because this? This messy, sarcastic, fiercely soft thing they had? It was the real kind. He didn’t need her to simmer down. And she didn’t need him to soften up. They just needed this. She finished rinsing the plates and set them in the drying rack with a satisfying clatter, wiping her hands on the towel slung over her shoulder. “And just so we’re clear,” she added, flicking him a glance that was all challenge, “there is no safe word if you bring out the whipped cream.” Her brows lifted like a dare. “Now go ahead, big guy. Make your threats. I’m still gonna win. And I’m gonna look hot doing it.” And God help her, she meant every word. |
Caleb didn’t bother pretending he wasn’t smiling. The look she threw him over her shoulder — all spark and challenge, framed by the steam of the sink and the glow of afternoon light — hit him square in the chest.
He crossed the kitchen at an unhurried pace, boots quiet against the floor, hands slipping into his back pockets like a man who already knew he was in trouble and had made peace with it. When he reached her, he leaned down just enough for his breath to stir the loose hair at the nape of her neck. “You really think you’re gonna make a sport out of this?” he murmured, voice low and rough around the edges. His tone was teasing, but the warmth in it softened the words. Lena didn’t turn, just flicked him a knowing smirk in the reflection of the window. Caleb’s grin deepened. One hand slid to her hip, thumb brushing slow circles through the soft fabric of his flannel she’d stolen. “Fine,” he said, half a laugh tucked into the word. “Consider me your willing opponent.” The counter rattled faintly when he leaned a little closer, his other hand braced beside the sink. “But don’t be surprised if I play dirty,” he added, pressing a quick kiss to the edge of her jaw before she could out-sass him again. The scent of soap and sawdust mingled between them — the smell of every version of home they’d built together. He tilted his head, eyes tracing the curve of her smile. “Whipped cream, syrup, whatever arsenal you’ve got, I’ll match it,” he said softly. “And I’ll still let you win. You know I’m weak for that grin.” Lena rolled her eyes, but he caught the corner of her mouth twitching — that reluctant smile she always tried to hide when he got too close. Caleb chuckled quietly, resting his forehead against hers. “You make trying to lose look like the best damn choice I’ve ever made,” he whispered. “So yeah… I’ll do the dishes, bring the syrup, keep showing up — long as I get to keep this.” He stayed there for another breath, the rhythm of her heartbeat pressed against his chest, the sound of the faucet still running like background music to their mess of a love story. Then, with that familiar crooked grin, he added, “Just remember — you call it winning. I call it strategy.” Lena laughed, shaking her head, but Caleb caught it — that flicker of affection in her eyes that said she knew he meant every word. And he did. Every damn one. |
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--- The faucet kept running. Lena didn’t notice until it was too obvious to ignore — her hands already clean, dishes stacked neatly in the drying rack, nothing left to do but stand there, motionless, with warm water slipping through her fingers and giving her away completely. She could feel him before she saw him. Heard his boots on the kitchen floor — slow, sure, measured. Heard the scrape of his breath as it caught behind her, low and deliberate. But she didn’t turn. Not when she felt the weight of his stare through the window’s reflection. Not when the air between them went heavy. Not even when his voice slipped in like smoke, curling around her spine. “You really think you’re gonna make a sport out of this?” Her smile twitched at the corners, smug and knowing, but her pulse betrayed her. God, she lived for this game. And still — she never quite remembered how to play once he got that close. Then came the hand. Low at her hip, calloused and warm, thumb dragging lazy circles through the soft fabric of his shirt that hung on her frame like it belonged there. Her body leaned back into it without permission. Fine, she told herself. Let him try. Lena kept her eyes trained on the reflection, watching the way his mouth tilted into a grin, the way his shoulders filled the space behind her like he was carved into it. She didn’t speak. Didn’t breathe deep. Not when his other hand braced beside the sink and his mouth brushed the edge of her jaw in a kiss too fleeting to defend against. She laughed. Quiet and sharp — the kind that cut through the thickness of the moment like a knife dipped in honey. But she still didn’t say a word. Not as he talked about syrup and surrender. Not as he dropped his forehead to hers like they were built for that kind of closeness. Not even when his voice dipped into something honest enough to steal the ground right out from under her. She waited. Let it sit there between them, this whole beautiful mess of affection and teasing and quiet war. Only when he finished — when he was fully, unapologetically done — did Lena finally reach forward and shut the faucet off with a flick of her wrist. The silence afterward rang louder than the running water ever had. Then, slow and deliberate, she turned around. Her smile curved up like it had claws. “Oh, baby,” she said sweetly, tracing her hand along his chest as she stepped in even closer, “I love playing dirty.” She rose onto her toes just enough to press a kiss to the corner of his mouth — not quite chaste, not quite a promise — then leaned back with a wicked glint in her eye. “Why else do you think I picked you?” she murmured, brushing a hand across his chest like she was dusting off a secret. Then, eyes dancing, she added, “You think I came all the way out here just to wilt in some sad little field? Please. If I was gonna replant my whole damn life, you better believe I picked the best flower in town. Strongest roots, meanest thorns, prettiest damn bloom for miles.” Her fingers toyed with the hem of his shirt — his, not hers — and her smile went downright dangerous. “Might’ve had to fight the bees for you,” she added, voice dropping to something low and soft, “but worth it.” She leaned in, slow and smug. “And now you’re all mine. So buckle up, wildflower. This bouquet doesn’t come with a return policy.” |
Caleb didn’t move at first. Just stood there, the sound of the faucet dying into quiet, the last beads of water slipping down the steel basin like punctuation marks to something he wasn’t ready to interrupt.
Lena’s voice hit him in waves — sugar and smoke, soft around the edges but sharp where it counted. He watched her turn, watched the way her eyes lit when she went on the attack, and he knew he was done for before she even touched him. When her fingers found his chest, he let out a low breath that might’ve been a laugh if it hadn’t caught halfway through. “Playing dirty?” he murmured, his hand catching her wrist before she could pull away. “Sweetheart, you wrote the rulebook.” The grin that followed wasn’t cocky, not really — more the kind that came from knowing he was knee-deep in something that had already won. He looked down at her, the curve of her mouth, the heat in her eyes, the dusting of sawdust still clinging to the sleeve of his shirt on her frame, and thought for the thousandth time that she could level him with nothing but a sentence. “You picked me, huh?” he said, voice dropping, gravel low. His thumb traced the inside of her wrist like it was a confession. “Hell of a choice for a woman who swore she was just passing through.” He leaned in until their foreheads brushed, until her breath mixed with his. “Strong roots, mean thorns, pretty bloom… yeah, that tracks. But you forgot something.” His other hand found her waist, pulling her close enough that her smirk faltered for just a second. “Wildflowers don’t belong in vases. They take over the whole damn field if you let ’em.” He kissed her then — slow, steady, with the kind of care that always came disguised as hunger. Not a claim, not this time — a recognition. A grounding. When he pulled back, his eyes flicked down to where her fingers still toyed with his shirt. “Fight the bees all you want,” he said, smile crooking again. “They sting, I build. Works out for both of us.” A pause, then softer — the kind of softness he only ever used for her. “And for the record?” His voice dropped, warm against her temple. “If this bouquet doesn’t come with a return policy… guess I better start building you a bigger garden.” He stayed there a moment longer, thumb still tracing idle circles against her hip, before he added with a grin that could undo any composure she had left, “You know, for all that talk about playing dirty… you’re still my favorite kind of mess.” |
Lena arched a brow at him, her smirk tugging slow and deliberate as she tilted her chin up just enough to close the already minimal space between them. “Well,” she murmured, voice slipping into something equal parts playful and dangerous, “you’re not wrong about me being a mess. But I’m the best kind of mess, Maren — the kind that redecorates your whole damn life and somehow makes it prettier.”
Her fingers toyed with the hem of his shirt, tugging him just slightly closer, like she was testing how much air they really needed between them. “And yeah,” she admitted, her grin softening at the edges, “you might have a point. I didn’t come here planning to stay. I came to fix up this pretty little mountain town, make things bloom, and get the hell back to Denver before anyone noticed I was gone.” Her tone dropped lower, sweeter, the truth threading through every word. “But then you had to go and ruin everything by being—” she paused, letting her lips graze the corner of his jaw, “my soulmate.” Another kiss followed, slow and smug. “So if anyone asks, I didn’t pick you, mister. You picked me.” He laughed quietly against her hair, and she smiled like she’d just won something. “And don’t think for a second that building me a bigger garden gets you off the hook for that hot tub,” she added, her voice turning bright again, teasing cutting through the softness. “I’ve got plans for that thing, Maren. Very specific, very steamy plans.” Her lips brushed his again — a whisper of a kiss, quick but sure. “You’ve got work to get back to,” she said, her tone lilting now, that sly glimmer back in her eyes. “And I’ve got… secret espionage to resume.” Her hand trailed along his chest, up to his collar, then tugged playfully at it. “But if you keep looking at me like that, neither one of us is getting anything done today.” She kissed him once more, softer this time — the kind that lingered like a dare. “Go on, mountain man,” she whispered against his mouth. “Before I decide your next project’s a bed you won’t be leaving anytime soon.” |
Caleb’s laugh was low — the kind that rumbled out of him like distant thunder, caught between disbelief and pure admiration. “You’re somethin’ else, you know that?” he murmured, his hands finding her waist again as if his body hadn’t gotten the memo that he was supposed to be leaving.
Her words still hung in the air, all silk and spark and truth, and for a moment he just looked at her — the light catching in her hair, the stubborn tilt of her chin, the softness that lived behind all that fire. He brushed his thumb along her jaw, slow and reverent. “Didn’t pick you,” he repeated quietly, a half-smile tugging at his mouth. “No, sweetheart. I think we both know it was more like gravity. You walked into town and the whole damn place started leaning your way.” Her smirk deepened, and he felt it hit his chest the way it always did — like a match striking. He leaned down until his lips hovered just beside her ear. “You wanna talk about redecorating?” he said softly, his breath warm against her skin. “You turned a man who used to talk to lumber into someone who checks the damn moon phases before he starts a project. I think the universe would call that a structural change.” Her laugh brushed his collar, and he grinned — the quiet kind, the kind that came when words stopped working. Then, that mention of the hot tub. That mischievous lilt. He groaned under his breath and tilted his head, eyes narrowing playfully. “You really think I forgot about that?” His voice was a drawl now, lazy and amused. “You’ve been talkin’ about steam and starlight for months. A man’s got priorities.” He kissed her again, soft and deliberate, like punctuation. “But for the record,” he murmured, “if there’s a list of projects that start with you and end in trouble, I’m not sure I wanna finish any of ‘em.” When she tugged his collar, he caught her wrist gently, his thumb tracing slow lines over the inside of it. “You say go on, but you don’t really mean it,” he said, eyes glinting with humor. “You like the part where I think about leaving more than the part where I actually do.” He dropped one last kiss to her forehead — an anchor, a promise. “I’ll go,” he said softly, though neither of them looked convinced. “But you should know, every time you tell me to get back to work, all I hear is you planning new ways to distract me.” He stepped back just far enough for the air to find its way between them again, his gaze still holding hers. “You win,” he said with a quiet grin. “Again. But I’m takin’ that as motivation. Gonna build that bed you just threatened me with.” He winked, hand lingering a beat longer on her hip before he finally turned for the door. “Just don’t blame me if I test it before the paint dries.” |
Lena watched him move, that familiar ache blooming slow and sweet in her chest like it always did when he said something he probably didn’t even realize would gut her a little—in the best kind of way.
Gravity, he’d said. And damn him, he meant it. She let out a slow breath, steadying herself with a hand on the counter as her heart did that fluttery thing it only ever did when he got soft on her. No one else in town would ever guess it, not with the way they played their parts—grumpy mountain man and bratty city girl, eternal flirt-war champions—but behind closed doors, he was steady and warm and hers. Always hers. And he remembered. Every time. Even her half-mocking, late-night rants about how the moon phases were sabotaging her tomato seedlings and probably his dovetail joints too. She’d said it once, in the middle of a spring thunderstorm with a whiskey glass in hand, that if the moon could drag oceans around, it sure as hell could mess with their crafts. He didn’t even argue. Just tucked the idea somewhere in that quiet brain of his, and started checking the waxing and waning calendar she pinned to the fridge. The man talked to wood like it had a soul, and he still made room for her nonsense. God, she loved him. Her eyes followed the flex of his shoulders as he started to move away, that familiar flannel pulling across his back just right. “Hate to see you go…” she called, lips twitching into a grin as she leaned casually on the counter. He paused, already shaking his head. “…but I do love watching you leave,” she finished, unapologetic and amused as she blatantly let her eyes drop to his ass. “Real scenic view today, Maren.” He half-turned, probably to shoot her a look, but she cut him off before he got there. “Wait.” She pushed off the counter and crossed the space between them in a few quick steps, catching the back of his flannel before he could reach the door. He stilled, and for a beat they just stood there—his body warm and close, hers pulled toward him like always. Then she tugged gently, just enough to turn him back toward her. Her palm found his chest again like it belonged there, and without saying a word, she rose on her toes to kiss him one last time. It wasn’t a quick peck or a heated promise. Just something slow, soft, and perfectly in-between. A kiss to carry him through the rest of the day. She pulled back a fraction, close enough for her breath to warm his lips, her fingers still curled in his shirt. “For the road,” she murmured, playful and sweet, her voice dipped in that dangerous affection she always tried to mask with sarcasm. And for once, she didn’t follow it with a smart remark. Because the truth was, she did love him like this—every part of him. The butt she ogled, the brain that remembered moon phases, the hands that built her dreams without needing a blueprint. He’d picked her, and now he was stuck with her. Poor guy. |
Caleb froze halfway through the doorway, his hand still hovering over the knob when her voice stopped him. That teasing, honeyed tone she used when she wanted to sound casual but was actually saying something that would knock the wind out of him.
He turned, slow and reluctant, because he already knew what would happen the second he looked at her. And there it was — that grin, the glint in her eyes, the way she could turn a kitchen into a damn gravity well just by standing in it. He’d swear every compass in Evergreen pointed straight to her when she looked at him like that. The “scenic view” comment earned her a low, rough laugh that started somewhere deep in his chest. “You’re lucky I like bein’ objectified by my favorite troublemaker,” he muttered, voice thick with amusement as he started to turn away again. Then came her wait. Her fingers caught the back of his flannel, and every ounce of humor in him went still. He let her tug, let her pull him back the way she always did — not by force, but by that quiet insistence she had, that invisible tether that never once let go. When she pressed her palm against his chest, it hit him like it always did — the simple, grounding truth of her hand there. The steady beat of something that felt like home, pounding beneath her fingers. He didn’t bother with words when she kissed him. Didn’t need to. He just bent slightly, let her take her time, his hand sliding up to cradle the side of her neck. His thumb traced the faint smear of sawdust still caught in her hairline, the gesture unthinking, tender, instinctive. When she pulled back, when she whispered for the road, he huffed a quiet breath against her lips that sounded suspiciously close to a sigh. “That’s a hell of a sendoff,” he said softly, his forehead resting against hers. “You do realize I’m gonna start takin’ longer and longer jobs just for an excuse to get more of those.” Her fingers still fisted in his shirt, and he let them. He didn’t want her to let go yet. He pressed one more kiss to her temple — a smaller one this time, all reverence and no tease — before stepping back just enough to meet her eyes. “You keep talkin’ like that,” he murmured, “and I’m gonna start thinkin’ I’m the lucky one.” Then, because she was looking at him like she’d fight the world for him and he was already lost, he grinned — small, crooked, unbearably sincere. “Be good, trouble,” he said, giving her hand a final squeeze before turning toward the door again. “And if you’re not, at least leave me a note this time.” The screen door creaked open, the afternoon light spilling across the floor. He looked back once, catching her silhouette in that amber glow — his girl, in his shirt, smiling like she knew exactly what she’d just done to him. Caleb laughed under his breath, shaking his head as he stepped outside. Yeah. He was absolutely ruined for anyone else — and somehow, it felt like the best thing that ever happened to him. |
Lena followed him out, lingering in the doorway like the air inside the house had suddenly gotten too thick. The screen door creaked shut behind her, and she crossed her arms as she leaned against the porch post, watching him with a softness she wouldn’t let show if he turned around too fast.
But he didn’t. Not at first. Caleb moved across the yard slow and sure, the afternoon light brushing golden across his shoulders. That familiar, work-worn flannel fit him like second nature, and she felt that stupid flutter start up again in her chest — the one she kept pretending wasn’t there even though it always showed up the second he walked away. She didn’t call out. Just waited, steady and smug, until he inevitably glanced toward the workshop. The moment his eyes flicked that way, she pointed two fingers from her eyes to his back — I’m watching you. A playful threat, not unlike the way she used to glare at squirrels raiding her garden. He shook his head, grinning as he reached the truck, but when he slid into the driver’s seat and looked toward her again, Lena changed tactics. She blew him a kiss. Big and dramatic, hand under her chin like a movie star. She even wiggled her fingers at the end, just to make him laugh. And sure enough, he did. She couldn’t hear it from the porch, but she saw the way his shoulders shook. Then the engine rumbled to life, and the truck pulled away, dust curling behind it in lazy swirls. When he disappeared down the drive, Lena let herself exhale. Then she got to work. --- The workshop felt bigger without him in it. Quieter. But not lonely. Not with the sawdust still clinging to the edges of the counter, not with the mug he'd left on the high shelf, not with the pencil tucked behind the light switch — the one he always forgot was there until he needed it. Lena rolled up her sleeves, grabbed the measurements she’d scribbled on the back of a seed packet, and set to work. The plan was simple: a hand-carved frame, thick-grained and dark-stained, with subtle floral etchings she’d traced from one of her old garden sketches. She’d already taken the photo — a sultry, smoky boudoir shot taken one afternoon when he’d left his flannel draped across the foot of her bed and the light had hit just right. She’d always meant to do something with it. Now felt like the time. It was her version of leaving fingerprints. Something shameless, something soft. Something that said I’m not going anywhere. She worked with intent, her hands steady even when her heart raced imagining his face when he found it. By the time the frame was nearly complete, dusk had crept in through the windows, painting the walls in soft golds and fading violets. Before she packed up, Lena took her time tidying the workshop. Not the deep clean she’d done once before — he already knew what that looked like — but something gentler. She wiped down the counters, oiled the tools, set his favorite chisel on the bench like a welcome home. And then she left small pieces of herself behind: A folded note tucked into the top drawer that read: Don’t worry. I’m not stealing your tools. Just borrowing your heart. A fresh sprig of rosemary from her kitchen garden balanced on his vise — for memory, for luck. And her chapstick — left on the windowsill with no explanation, just enough to make him smile and mutter something about her being a menace. Satisfied, Lena dusted off her hands and locked up. --- Back in the house, she headed straight for the shower — scrubbing off the sawdust, the sweat, the sun. She wrapped her hair in a towel and slipped into one of his too-big old band tees, letting the hem fall to her thighs as she padded barefoot into the kitchen. The oven clicked on. She moved like she belonged there now — barefoot on hardwood, humming softly as she pulled ingredients from the fridge. Tonight’s dinner was simple, hearty, and deliberately heavy on the flavors he liked best. She wanted the food warm, the house clean, and her hair just barely damp by the time he walked back in. Because when Caleb Maren came home… She wanted him to know he had something worth staying for. |
Caleb always said he could tell what kind of day it had been by the way the house smelled before he even opened the door.
Tonight, it hit him before he made it halfway up the drive — rosemary, garlic, a hint of something sweet curling through the evening air. The kind of scent that made the ache in his shoulders loosen before he even realized he’d been carrying it. The porch light was on, the one she’d insisted they install last fall — warm and soft, not the harsh white he’d originally picked. The glow hit the side of the house like a promise, and when he stepped inside, the sight of her brought that quiet, gut-deep peace he still hadn’t figured out how to explain. Barefoot. His shirt. Hair still damp and curling at the ends. He didn’t need dinner. He didn’t need a single word. “Smells like trouble,” he said anyway, leaning against the doorframe, voice low and roughened from the chill outside. She turned at that, smile tugging slow and easy, the towel still hanging over her shoulder. The sight of her in his old tee nearly stopped him cold — she wore it like it had been waiting for her. Caleb set his keys down, took a step forward, then another. “You been busy,” he murmured, his gaze flicking over her — not in a hungry way, but the way a craftsman looks at a finished piece and sees every hour that went into it. “Smells like rosemary and sin in here.” Lena snorted, but he could see it in the way her lips curved — she liked it when he noticed. He crossed to the stove, peering into one of the pans like he had any business doing so, and found exactly what he expected: something rich, golden, and cooked with far too much care to call casual. “You cook like you’re tryin’ to make a man forget he ever left home,” he said, glancing back at her. “Pretty sure you’re overqualified for that.” When she tried to nudge him away from the counter, he caught her hand, turned it over, and saw the faint red edge of where the sander had kissed her earlier. His thumb brushed the mark gently. “So that’s what you were hidin’ from me,” he said quietly, no teasing now — just warmth. Lena’s eyes flicked up, playful defiance meeting quiet affection. He smiled — slow, steady, the kind of smile that settled somewhere beneath the ribs. “You don’t know how bad I wanna go see it,” he admitted. “But I’ll wait. If you tell me when.” He let her hand go and moved behind her instead, arms circling her waist, his chin dropping to the curve of her shoulder. The damp scent of her hair — citrus and soap — hit him like a memory he wanted to stay inside of. “You keep doin’ this,” he murmured against her neck, “I’m gonna start thinkin’ the workshop’s just an excuse to come home to you like this every night.” Lena laughed, the sound small and bright, and he felt it echo right through him. He pressed a kiss just below her ear, soft enough to almost miss, and stayed there — letting the quiet of the house and the rhythm of her breathing fill in all the things he didn’t say out loud. Then, without moving, he added in that low, amused drawl that always got her to roll her eyes: “Dinner first, though. Otherwise, I’ll end up worshippin’ the cook instead of the meal — and I’m tryin’ to keep my priorities straight.” She elbowed him gently, and he grinned, turning her to face him, his hands still loose around her waist. “Missed you today,” he said simply. And he meant it. Every word, every quiet in-between. |
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